Today I saw the sunrise

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Today I saw the sunrise
For the very first time.
I forgot to take my camera
So I'll describe it in this rhyme.

When we left home, the sky was dark,
Dark blue, pin-pricked with stars.
Everywhere was quiet and still,
On the road no moving cars.

We walked towards the pebbled beach,
My four-legged friend and me.
The sky was lit with orange
Along the edge, across the sea.

South along the shingle, looking
Back so I could see it,
I walked and turned and walked and turned,
I didn't want to miss it.

By the time we reached our walk's end,
The sky wore early morning light.
Its orange trim was retreating
But there was still no sun in sight.

Then a bright zigzag of orange
Painted plane trails in one spot.
It was coming!  It was coming!
Glowing light and burning hot!

So we sat down on the pebbles,
Glistening wet still from the sea,
And we watched the orange zigzags,
Well, my friend didn't, only me.

And it came then, just a little,
Glowing golden, almost white.
Just a tip above the ocean,
Smooth and fast now, gaining height.

Without dark shades, it was too bright,
So I shielded my eyes with my hand,
Peeked at our star between my fingers,
And blinked orange spots on the land.

The thing I've learned, and should have known,
Is really worth a mention -
Never attempt to view the dawn
Without ample eye-protection!

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17 responses to “Today I saw the sunrise”

  1. loujen haxm'Yor Avatar

    Very nice descriptive verse. How true– those last two lines.
    Art

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    1. Violet's Vegan Comics Avatar

      Ha ha ha 😀 Thanks Art

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  2. festo_sanjo Avatar

    So pleasing on the eye as it feels like I was there while you were observing everything 😀

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  3. Taylorッ Avatar
    Taylorッ

    Great poem I enjoyed your description of the rise. More people have to
    Experience the beauty ☀️

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  4. stockdalewolfe Avatar

    Sounds great! This is the first poem I have seen by you.

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    1. Violet's Vegan Comics Avatar

      Thank you 🙂 I’ve done loads of poems 🙂

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      1. stockdalewolfe Avatar

        Sorry I missed them. I just have gotten the vegan comics which I admire. Don’t quite know how to access everything. Will keep an eye out! Thanks for the likes on my blog!❣️

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        1. Violet's Vegan Comics Avatar

          My pleasure, and thank you very much. Maybe you’re just coming at it from the WordPress Reader. The website has a menu at the top so I hope that makes it easier to find things 😀

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      2. stockdalewolfe Avatar

        Thanks for the tip. I will investigate. I have a very tenuous existence with WordPress and Twitter. Really hardly know what I am doing.😊

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        1. Violet's Vegan Comics Avatar

          Ha ha ha 😀 I’m clueless with social media too 🙂

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  5. Miranda Lemon Avatar

    Wow, what an incredible experience! I’m so glad you enjoyed it so much. 😀 I wish I had seen it too. 😀

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    1. Violet's Vegan Comics Avatar

      I highly recommend you do – with very dark glasses. It’s silly, I know, but I thought that somehow, being low down would make it not so bright. Duh! xx

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      1. Miranda Lemon Avatar

        Thank you! 😀 Hahaha, I will try to remember my sunglasses. 😀 xx

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